Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the whole world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Vegetarian is the new trend practicing by many people in the world. They believe this way of life could keep up their body condition and, has advantages for the earth. this essay will discuss the views and give the opinion as a conclusion.
Avoiding to eat animal product such as meat, either red meat or white meat and, fish have prevailed as the healthiest way of living. Since it has a lot of fat and other substances risking one health. according to the studies, there are many diseases associated with meat or fish consumption. High blood pressure, for instance, is caused by exceeding animal protein products and lack of physical activities. Moreover, being a vegan is assumed that could prevent obesity since the amount of nutrition contains in the fruits and vegetables is enough according to the body requirement. As a result, the people well-being could be achieved by lowering the consumption that of product.
Another reason why people prefer a plant-based diet is because of environmental issue. it is a fact that animal farming is one of the main contributors to greenhouse gases. The studies show that 15% of greenhouse gases were produced by the production of animal products. By reducing consuming these products means protecting the environment.
Regarding this issue, I personally believe that consuming animal products could bring more disadvantages to the body and the world. since the amount of protein required by the body could be fulfilled by a vegetable product, I recommend that reducing the number of animal product consumption could prevent illness and saving the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1641221374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85617855854 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4222723287 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154542402077 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560936816817 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663523925777 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107245929051 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990641934815 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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