Some people choose to work at one job for a long time. Others prefer to change jobs frequently. Which way do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Modern society goes hand-in-hand with the increasing pressure of work and economic livelihoods on people. Under pressure, many people live in many occupations for many different reasons. However, they have both benefits and drawbacks to the decision to change careers. Personally, I prefer to change jobs frequently.
Obviously, there are some positives when you decide to change jobs. first, I have the opportunity to develop a larger environmental career. working in the old environment did not provide many opportunities for me to assert myself and advance in my work. For example, in many cases, people decide to work for another company because they were assigned a higher role in their old jobs, like being a manager or a leader.
Secondly, doing more than one job helps me accumulate more skills and experience.Facing and dealing with difficulties in many jobs helps me become more flexible and learn many lessons from practice. For example, my first job when I was in college was working as a waiter to help me become more physically agile. Then I worked as a marketing officer. From this job, I trained in dexterity when communicating with customers.
Thirdly, if I change my job frequently, I can expand the network. I have more relationships with my friends and coworkers, bosses, and partners from a different company. Otherwise, if I only stay in one company, I am only able to know coworkers in my office.For example, if I worked in the old work environment with ten people, I would move to work in another environment with twenty people, from which I would have the opportunity to interact with thirty people.
In short, changing jobs brings more benefits to me than just having a stable job, such as advancement opportunities, experience and knowledge, along with great social connections. I therefore feel that changing jobs at the right times is right for me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: Working
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in short, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98070030248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3751940819 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8235294118 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220631012319 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803089666959 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553590226649 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130300467645 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286662974409 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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