Big cities have their own advantages as well as disadvantage, depending upon their affinity some found it more attractive and well facilitated in the case of education ,employments, medicine, sport, transportation and also in shopping. On the other hand, some are more disgruntled with pollution, traffic, population and also found difficult in adjustment with an environment. I am more abiding with first. Despite of, few disadvantages, the big cities have a wonderful life .
firstly, some people found large cities life more comfortable than small cities in the case of education, sport, employments, hospital facilities. for instances, one of my friend who lives in a village got an accident, due to the unavailability of facilities he had to come to a city for treatment, luckily he was safe. and nowadays a lot of students move to town for further study as well as for employment to make bright future. in my case, I am in a city only because of my interest in the sport, want to be successful sportsman which is only possible when facilities are available that are only found in big cities.
In my village, there are only one vahical to cities that runs early morning but in cities, there are a lot of transports systems such as cars , moterbikes, as well as flight facilities.
One the other hand , some believe cities have more disadvantages such as pollutions, traffics, and mainly difficulties in adjustments. Many researcher shows air, water pollution is major problem in cities that lead to many mental and physical diseases such as bronchitis, frustration, insomnia . Mainly most of people found difficulty in adjustment with traffics , in market, in shopping malls also with people who are very familiar with cities that give frustration and lead to dissatisfaction toward cities life.
finally, in my point of view, i always found cities life more satisfactory, I got chance to study higher education that help me to got good job which made me suitable candidate to live in this modern era. So i believe, although their are few disadvantages , we got happy life in a city .
In conclusion, differents people have differents views about large cities but i always found it good and happier place due to the availability of a lot of facilities that make life easy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03166226913 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03358141107 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514511873351 0.561755894193 92% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0403029574 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.133333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18628700623 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651095141833 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403797211911 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945166860682 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402697364973 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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