Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not
needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by
computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays advanced technology gives most people a chance to enjoy historical objects and works of art on a computer screen. Some people even believe that because of this, we no longer need using museums and art exhibitions to display artworks. In my opinion, it is I disagree with this idea and believe that computer screen is not the right way to see artworks.
It costs lots of money to maintain a museum or art gallery when we need a budget for up-keeping and organizing a special environment such as a certain temperature to keep ancient items says. Sometimes the museum is supported budget by the local authority that is enough for their activities to improve and develop the museum. However, there are some situations in which the museum has to afford itself that is extremely hard
On the other hand, the advantages of museums outweigh the drawbacks that we should maintain them, Firstly, this is an ideal place to keep ancient items and valuable objects safe. They have rules and caretakers that can guarantee their quality and quality. Besides, these things are protected from stealing and damaging caused by natural disasters or actions on purpose. Secondly, we can not deny the educational value of maintaining the museum. It is always helpful to students who desire to learn more about history or art by going to museums or art galleries. Here they are able to acquire knowledge and understanding more practical and quickly them learning from books or teachers.
In conclusion, although it is quite difficult to maintain museum r art exhibitions nowadays, it is always better to do that because of some
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...always better to do that because of some
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95220588235 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67709420256 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9796968911 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332375705519 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108646444304 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804291898858 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19616406248 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777065595767 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.