It is usually controversial on whether the authorities should be involved utilising lawful tools to solve the inadequency of homehold rubbish. Albeit , it seems this suggestion can solve the deliemma faced by all of us , from my perpective , it is fanciful to realise, let alone resolving the essential problem.
Some advercates consider the best way to fully recycle the home waste is to resolve to laws . Through a series of discussion and debates , approperiate clauses and rules will be finally approved , surpervising those who fail to obey and taking a certain level of punishment like a small sum of fines and community services , or even hurling into the prison for some time. Therefore , given the consequences caused by their behaviours , many repeated offenders will be forced to change their harmful habits ,afterall there is no one wanting to be punished again and again.
Nevetheless , the above ambition is more like fantancy rather than reality . To begin with , the orginal cause of this problem puzzles the whole society is that people are too busy to be aware of the results caused by their daily activities instead of exerting pollution deliberately , which means legal punishments could not act as designers anticipated. Besides, if the relating laws were carried out, there would have been a huge number of labour and financail cost required from the administrators, leading to more deficits for balancing. Although the relating charge can be compesated by the criminals , the amount will never be sufficient to fill the gab. Futhermore , high-handed laws will undoubtly cause some disastrous consequences like striking and demonstration and so forth. The harzard to both economy or safty of the country must have be beyond imaginations .
Thus , it is time to enbrace the power of market instead of law. On one hand , there is no one willing to contribut precious time on dealing with rubbish, which is absolutely true. As a result , it is plausible for them to spend some money to buy some time , delivering those unnecessary work to professials . With the help of modern technologies, the harmless can be realized . For instance , earth worms are able to digest the organic ingredients among the rubbish into the materials full of fertility, which has already been used to convert the wasted lands into valueable farms . As for this little insect itself, various functions have been exploited to benefit the people in cosmetics and medical fields. Through this way, a new industry is practial to connect the each section together to eliminate the problem once for all . On the other hand , a promising industry represents the breakthrough in recycling wastes that it may be purchased by othe countries suffering with the same problem. On top of that , this new industry will be the potential resources for the income of goverments to rise their income. So does the decline in the rate of unemployment to ease the pressure on their shoulders.
In conclusion, resoving to market is superior to legal tools . Needless to say, under the help of the market can enventually deal with the household waste without causing more troubles. Only in this way can both goverments and residents enjoy a brighter future and ildeal environment.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature 78
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 78
- the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was 84
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 41.998997996 198% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2708.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 529.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1190926276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86358683705 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578449905482 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3366516913 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160788040183 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044264040376 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422695246311 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852564362714 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304415718358 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.