Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of arts by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
When the issue of operating museums and galleries comes into view, there exist some controversial opinions. Naysayers of such sites claim that it is superfluous to maintain them because of the technology breakthroughs, which provide images of artifacts and artworks for viewers. this essay totally disagrees with this perspective since public museums embody all aspects of a nation's culture and enhance the economy through their tourism intentions.
First and foremost, there is an indisputable fact that maintaining art and historical sites can preserve the time-honored culture. To be more specific, the misrepresentation of some abstract masterpieces, which are belonged solely to a country's culture, could take its toll on the implication of such works, thus provide uninformed viewers with wrong information. For instance, some traitors can manipulate adolescents' viewpoints by distorting historical knowledge; therefore, they detrimentally affect society and culture. this example directly suggests that while viewing artifacts through the internet can be more comfortable and cheaper, compared to visiting public museums, people may misunderstand the representative meanings of such objects due to the cosmopolitan character of the internet.
Additionally, historical locations serve as lucrative tourists attractions, thus indirectly spur the economy. Moreover, watching sculptures and artworks in the museum enhances tourists' experiences and creates emotional appeals. take the Mona Lisa painting in the Lourve museum as an emblematic example, it is obvious to acknowledge that while many pictures and copies of this works appear on all social network sites, many visitors still opt for visiting the museum as it possesses more aesthetic value than the images on the internet. therefore, such historical places simultaneously enhance individuals' emotions and the economy of a nation.
while some critics may argue that the expense of opening museums is expensive and unnecessary, I believe that it is overshadowed by the profits earning from local and overseas visitors.
In conclusion, although the contributions of technology to artworks bring convenience, I totally run counter to the viewpoint that the presence of galleries is unnecessary because such attractions positively affect our society and the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88200589971 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18644973967 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59587020649 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7843943514 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.384615385 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224742904987 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660198059118 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354105957456 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996585004292 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593999436377 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.