Some people think that it is a waste of time to plan and think about your future or life. They have the point that we should simply enjoy the present moment. I agree to some extent that we should enjoy being in the present moment but I greatly appreciate the importance of planning in life. As Albert Einstein said that the distance between past and future is a persistent illusion. But I also think that in order to live approximately sixety years of your life, one must plan some future's goals and achieve them to avoid regrets in the later life.
As it goes without saying that an unexamined life is not worth living. All the greatest persons who had lived in past and achieved something worth-admiring, aslo had plannings for their future. I would like to illustrate the example of a Elon Musk, a famous billionaire and founder of Specex. If we look into his life, we find a lot of evidences about his future planning. His first company, Zip2 founded in 1999, came into existance after a lot of hardwork and right planning. After creating zip2, he started thinking about Tesla, an electric car company, then spacex and so on. Future is not something that happens but it is what we make it to happen. It is all done by right stratigies and planning. History is full of such people who were the master planners of their time.
If anyone don't want to take part in society, then one can live in present. But if you want to accomplish something great in this world, then planning is one of the crucial steps towards success. There are also certain detriments of not planning your coming life or thinking about future. First, your mind will be occupied by involuntary thoughts and you won't be able to control them. Second, in the 21st century, you can't have any social status if you live always in present moment. The only ability of humans that make us superior to all other species, we can say, is planning. So I plan a lot about my future and I think it is the first towards your accomplishments.
- Nowadays many people prefer to use their own cars to commute rather than buses and trains Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to change it 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 67
- Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time They argue that people should simply live in the moment Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hem to avoid regrets in the later life. As it goes without saying that an unexamin...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...would like to illustrate the example of a Elon Musk, a famous billionaire and fou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ter planners of their time. If anyone dont want to take part in society, then one ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... them. Second, in the 21st century, you cant have any social status if you live alwa...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'live'.
Suggestion: always live
... you cant have any social status if you live always in present moment. The only ability of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53038674033 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44973272825 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9064462692 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0952380952 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336974795431 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916703584629 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981742461034 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232024766994 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113710253636 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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