Some people believe that, nowadays, we have a lot of choices. In other words, we have abundant activities to perform these days. As far as my agreement is concerned, I think it is absolutely true. Because we are living in the 21st century, and the lives of modern people are totally different from the ancient ones. In today's world, we have diverse fields of studies, work and entertainment. Gone are those days when people used to spend their whole lives sticking to one or few activities. For example, In the 12th century, if someone was born in a farmer's family, he would spend his whole life as a farmer. There were no such opportunities for our ancestors as there are for us at present.
About 10,000 years ago, the majority of the people on earth were farmers. They spend their whole lives growing food, vegetables, and protecting their lands from other humans. There is another example to illustrate choices in the field of study. The first subject to study was Natural Philosophy and all truth-seeker had to study that subject. In contrast, there are numerous subjects now available to study these days and each subject has its sub-fields of studies. In the old days, the variety of food was limited and you have to eat to survive. On the other hand, there are many varieties of food available in the market these days.
Since the human developed consciousness, they have been exploring each and everything within and outside of this planet. However, I also think that too many choices in life make it difficult to choose the right one. For example, in the field of professions, many are struggling to find the right profession in life to live up to their satisfaction. But, in the past people used to have few choices and it was easy for them to select any field.
I think life is full of diversity either it is in choices of studies, professions, sports etc or in the universe. According to my point of agreement, I think life is all about making different choices and even your prosperity is determined by the choices you make throughout your life.
- Nowadays many people prefer to use their own cars to commute rather than buses and trains Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to change it 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 67
- Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time They argue that people should simply live in the moment Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...f studies, work and entertainment. Gone are those days when people used to spend th...
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Line 1, column 551, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
... 12th century, if someone was born in a farmers family, he would spend his whole life a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, i think, in contrast, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69889502762 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6091990107 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3628096459 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191612204566 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573631478163 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587439956461 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110828488703 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042157137683 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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