Some people fee that school should teach children how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What skills do people need to be good parents?
Bringing children up under parent's supervision is considered morally admirable. Some opine that school can play a role to produce good traits of parenting. However, I believe, there is no alternative of a parent to do so.
There is an undeniably unjustifiable thought that the school is the place where a student may learn how to be good parents. Many schools are probably struggling in delivering the education effectively such as class-lecture and homework related to student's studies. If this extra work was given to the school, and then I believe, they would not be perfect at teaching academic courses along with additional work of how they can be a good mother or father. Majority of the school staff is unmarried particularly in many South Asian countries, for example. So not having experienced staff to teach how to act as a good father or mother could beget undesirable aftermaths; thereby getting advice in this regard from educational institute seems imprudent.
The very first and inevitable expertness of a prudent parent is being responsible. While upbringing, children usually need food, education and clothes. Added to this, it is immoral to ask for it from other people rather than their parents. In many religions, for instance, the top duty of the parents is to provide financial assistance to their children from as long as they get settled. Therefore, ensuring the basic needs of their children is a skill demanded largely.
Another skill that good parents must have is spending time with their children whenever possible. It is a cliché that parents are your best friends. If they are not with their children in good and bad days, who will be? Taking this into consideration, parents must be able to share their time and should be emotionally supportive in the bad times of their children so that they cannot feel isolated.
In conclusion, only parents are the best teacher to guide their children about parental life while good parents are those who are accountable for the needs and the time that children require normally.
- Some people believe that the media has a strong impact on people s lives others feel that is a politician who has the most control over the way people live Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that the media has a strong impact on people s lives others feel that is a politician who has the most control over the way people live Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that the media has a strong impact on people s lives others feel that is a politician who has the most control over the way people live Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Some people fee that school should teach children how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion What skills do people need to be good parents 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04692082111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76657892428 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4618979772 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409272965744 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118383798268 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564329670572 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213711391217 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259798637986 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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