Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
Nowadays, workers like doctors ,nurses and teachers are underpaid comparing to the film's Stars and artists. Despite the importance of certain professionals' job on the society we notice this difference in payment especially if the teachers , doctors and nurses are working for the government .
To address this issue, we must consider that teachers ,nurses and doctors are playing a very crucial role in our life and the governments must support them by all the ways .but comparing their salaries with the artists's doesn't seem so relevant.
First of all , we cannot assume that all the wor...
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I think that the most important criteria has to be set is the effect of the profession on the society , and the life in general .
I think that the most important criteria which has to be set is the effect of the profession on the society , and the life in general .
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