No one can deny the fact that some professions are paid more and others less. Duties like that of doctors, nurses or armed forces can not be weighed on the basis of money paid as they are very much necessary for the society and nation. But these noble occupation's sometimes do not get that much amount of monetary benefits as they deserve in comparison to entertainers.They are judged on the factors of knowledge and experience. I believe there should be a certain measuring stick for celebrities too.
Although, many would argue the fact that people like film stars, pop musicians or sports stars have short lived career and hence are paid well. To add, they say that these stars do not enjoy any breaks during their work stint as well as no retirement benefits. So they have to plan their future living and in the process they are earning huge amount to secure their next phase of life post leaving that industry.
On the other hand, people in certain profiles are more dedicated to noble cause and working towards betterment of the people and the country. Hence these jobs can not be neglected and should be paid at par with those of stars. The traditional approach of paying should be scrapped and some new measure should be implemented.
To conclude, I would say that no drastic measures should be taken immediately but there should be some kind of autonomous body or committee to review the perks structure so the lesser paid sections do not feel let down. A nation can survive without reel life stars but not without real life stars.
- You are expriencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain1.Why you are writing to him2.Why you cannot pay the rent3.When you will pay the rent. 84
- You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abo 84
- You are studying a short course in another country Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider There is a major problem with the accommodation Write a letter to the course provider In your letter Say what the problem is Describe the accommod 77
- Some people feel that entertainers(eg.film stars,pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid? 85
- Write a letter to your new employer stating that your inability to join duty on the prescribed date and asking for extra time to join. Give valid reasons for the delay. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...y deserve in comparison to entertainers.They are judged on the factors of knowledge ...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tterment of the people and the country. Hence these jobs can not be neglected and sho...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256055363322 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.179930795848 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0692041522491 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0588235294118 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0346020761246 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121107266436 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0519031141869 0.0403226058552 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43394229757 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242214532872 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00346020761246 0.00163938923432 211% => OK
Determiners: 0.0899653979239 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0415224913495 0.021408717616 194% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1550.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71955719557 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30258302583 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191881918819 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125461254613 0.203846283523 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0922509225092 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43394229757 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.2862938475 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5833333333 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7575130443 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 41.7715252153 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.56962025316 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313334740908 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130277882527 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0940391099999 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564132819736 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13885475425 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133094589648 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716682630354 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259320285263 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0524557905811 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207108844697 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116052223827 0.058150111329 20% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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