Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
With the prosperity of advanced technology, residents nowadays have more chances to get instant access to various genres of film sources to chill out, including violent movies. While there are several valid arguments that such kinds of films should be banned on a large scale, others believe that they should control the level of violent movies before officially being displayed on air. This essay will shed light on both views before making a final decision.
One major ground behind the rise of prohibiting violent content is that it may have a negative impact on the youth’s psyche. Obviously, most teenagers are experiencing the development period of cognition, which means they do not have a fully comprehensive perception of every aspect of life. Therefore, they are prone to be affected by the numerous savage acts of villains, even worse resulting in anti-social behaviors among kids. According to a recent report in Vietnam, there is a strong correlation between delinquent juveniles and films that contain age-unappropriated content. For example, in Japan, a 24-year-old man dressed up a Joker and set a train on fire after watching violent movies on the telly.
Having said that, violent films are seen as an indispensable part in entertainment programs for many people. Such films play an important role in helping audiences let their hair down after a long period of working wholeheartedly. These viewers find joy from the thrill and excitement offered by violent elements. Therefore, this may be considered an injustice to these viewers’ hobbies if the original cause arises from the sake of minority individuals. Furthermore, without actions, filmmakers have a difficulty in reaching the target audiences due to the lack of a key ingredient to build films’ charm. Nowadays, 90 percent of movies are sprinkled with violence, as the slightest form of physical conflicts can be seen as violent Consequently, it is pretty hard to make these films hit the box office in order to generate huge profits. In the long term, this policy is likely to discourage aspiring film producers, far beyond having a detrimental impact on stimulating the economy.
In conclusion, although those movies filtering savage elements will do more harm than good for youngsters, I contend that the government should introduce policies to rigid screening them as a substitution for entirely banning them.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2819843342 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94684738247 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644908616188 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9551425729 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4375 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214212928433 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601233884997 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513066997625 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123230412555 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589916832576 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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