Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'testing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: testing
...Some people considered that it requires to test new medicines on animals, while other p...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...step to do on animals and it is not fai.I will discuss about both views and give ...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ew medicines which initiated on animals.However, it requires for some experimental basi...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...uired for some pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines have required some experiment...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...poses which is first to test on animals.Meanwhile, it has necessary of some experimental ...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...perimental basis because of it will not affect upon the humans and this is the reason behin...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...f lead to extinct some breed of animals.Hence, They disappeared from the world.while,...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...d be lead to extinct particular species.However, There are some necessary test which ha...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tests'?
Suggestion: tests
...ecies.However, There are some necessary test which has performed upon the animals ot...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19339622642 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14973920612 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457547169811 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2610913105 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 275.25 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291972104326 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203751870759 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721140594045 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203751870759 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721140594045 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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