Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some other people have not benefited from; to what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is undoubtedly that newly-invented technologies play a crucial role in society as a whole. While I agree that online networks have negatively impacted on people, I also believe that the important of e-communication is too obvious to be ignored in modern life.
On the one hand, up-to-date technologies have its own disadvantage to the people lifestyle. First of all, this tools lead to the dearth of social connection and decreased human interaction. It means that, as individuals have a tendency to spend a great of their time in using the internet, it is tough for them to have frequent contact and communicate face-to-face with people in real life. Therefore, this lack of communication leads to people is vulnerable to be isolated. Another drawback is that the possibility of people’ losing the concentration on their work. For example, people could be addicted to surf the web or shopping online, being indifferent to their responsibility and, thereby the quality of work decline.
On the other hand, modern communication has a positive influence on society. One striking advantage is the newly-invented tools have revolutionized the way we communicate. Most of us have greatly benefited from e-mail or internet chat program such as Facebook or Twister. These incredibly useful technologies enable people to keep in touch with their loved ones in far away places. Moreover, this modern technology helps individuals to enrich their knowledge. For instance, people can gain access to any information with the click of a mouse instead of spending a day long in a library.
In conclusion, although I concur with the negative of up-to-date tools for the whole social, I would believe that the positive effects of the modern communication are far greater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...eople to keep in touch with their loved ones in far away places. Moreover, this mode...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24647887324 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20483665427 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6913714182 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241906908514 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757179608935 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517829960249 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128575629337 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616309580071 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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