Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are two various viewpoints regarding the importance of teachers or students and their qualifications to streamline the education process. I neither agree nor disagree and believe both should possess an adequate proficiency and motivation level.
In general, a strong motivation is required to push students through the education path and make that much smoother for them. This motivation role could be played by the school teachers, professionals in treating with the pupils, making them more enthusiastic about being trained correctly, and enhancing their knowledge appropriately. If the students have no attitude during their education period, an excellent tutor tends to create that in the students. Take most of us as an obvious example. However, we had not been interested in a specific course for a couple of our educating years, became in that only because of a teacher making that course attractive for us, and she/he made a revolution in our educating path.
On the other hand, how much a teacher is perfect; it is the students who should utilize the teacher’s merits and proficiency during their studying. If a fresh teacher performs the best action to encourage the students to study hard, and make them successful pupils. In contrast, the students are reluctant and do not pay enough attention to the lessons; the teacher’s efforts will not be productive. An excellent teacher, for instance, uses a variety of methods and modern technology to train the subjects, will be disappointed if he/she observes no intention from the students, so in this case, the importance of students’ attitude could be essential.
In conclusion, due to the students' success, not only should they be willing to broaden their knowledge and use the opportunities of learning in the best way, the teachers should be qualified and professional in behaving with the students by the best method of educating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e essential. In conclusion, due to the students success, not only should they be willin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97251280437 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1069632733 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203934115693 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770820804675 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447660300066 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12331371135 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363272503521 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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