Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student's attitude is more important to succeed in education.
Over the past few years, it is undeniable that there has been an ongoing debate about whether the cause of outstanding achievements is natural aptitude or good teaching. In my personal opinion, although I acknowledge that gifted people can acquire knowledge easily, I still believe that a good coach is of great importance in the education system.
On the one hand, an experienced tutor can provide pupils with well-designed lessons. In other words, as tutors undergoing many vocational education trainings, which means that they will know the best method to deliver lessons to students appropriately and provide a better student-centered approach. As a result, since students are forced to perform academic rigor with rigorous curriculum through pedagogical practices by lecturers, they are likely to comprehend the lessons and have a better understanding of those fields.
On the other hand, inherent ability is of great significance to achieve fruitful academic performance. To begin, if one person has innate talent and intellectual curiosity, they will feel the urge to discover and investigate all subjects they find interesting. Therefore, the more they autodidactism, the deeper knowledge they acquire. A tangible illustration of that could be Thomas Edison, who is refused to go to school when he was at a young age. In contrast to what the teacher said, with his inborn talent and characteristic, he became a prominent scholar without any lessons given by teachers.
In conclusion, a good teacher can deliver the appropriate knowledge and quality practices for students in order to acquire excellent outcomes, but the individual ability is also an integral part of academic success as it fosters intellectual curiosity and scholarly inquisitiveness in those students.
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- Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student s attitude is more important to succeed in education 78
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities Do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...atural aptitude or good teaching. In my personal opinion, although I acknowledge that gifted peo...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at importance in the education system. On the one hand, an experienced tutor ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48913043478 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17810217557 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4998558522 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156368156342 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488542454456 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509373668846 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871589215482 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030931847986 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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