Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantage to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Accommodation has always been a long-term matter to many households. Provided that, the proliferation of houses and flats turns into a roadblock to the buyers in deciding which one to settle down. While many assume that houses have more frailties than flats, others favor the benefits of apartments. Personally, I perceive that it eventually boils down into 2 differences: price and privacy.
In terms of the total real-estate cost, the customers can consistently take the financial advantage in purchasing an apartment. For example, in Asia, one of the most considerable preferential features included in the contract is the gradual pay for the ownership of the apartments while compared to houses, customers have to hand the cash right away. On the other side, in regard to the long-run investment, with the active annual maintenance, the real-estate price of houses can in return gives the buyers a second chance in reselling. In contrast, the time-after-time deterioration of apartments is inevitable.
However, besides cost, one of the intriguing factors in houses is the provided privacy inside it. With the wall-sharing construction of apartments, private privacy can not be ensured meanwhile with the separated arrangement in houses, there is no nuisance from neighbors. On the other hand, houses still prove a flaw in security. Most of the residents settling in a combined apartments can receive the protection from 24/7 surveillance camera and trained guards in every apartment’ s main hall while house owners have to make sure of their houses’ security on their own.
In conclusion, each of these two types accommodation has its own upper-hand features that will fit in each individual’ cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15131866492 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8067418284 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197109458946 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605601887802 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488319025961 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961302746375 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576432974452 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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