Living in an apartment is considered more beneficial in comparison to residing in a house by some individuals. However, I think the merits of living in a house outweighs its demerits in terms of improving the level of privacy for families and being more suitable for their offspring.
Houses provide more privacy for citizens since unlike apartment blocks which many people live together in different floors, in most cases houses are not close to each other. For example, if there is a loud argument between family members who are living in a house, neighbors are less likely to hear that argument due to distances between houses, which means residents can enjoy more privacy.
Moreover, children requires a place in which they can easily play without being worried about disturbing other neighbors. Houses have usually a green space in front of main door which children can go there and play with their siblings. I remember when I was a child, our house had a big yard which I could freely play with my peers there. The more space children have to play, the healthier children are. Thus, if parents tend to have healthier children, they can live in a house instead of living an apartment which limits children to be active physically.
Some people may argue that, apartments are have more security compared with houses and they are in danger of theft less than houses since thieves are less likely to steal from apartments where many neighbors can see them. But I say, we can install burglar alarm in our houses in order to prevent housebreakers to enter to our houses.
In conclusion, I believe living in a house can be extremely advantageous for people, regarding the fact that they increase privacy and they also benefit children.
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? 73
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 67
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89527027027 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52565136353 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9337536265 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329895392716 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133184446342 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105926773452 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194097539547 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704942631027 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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