The diagrams provide some information on average temperatures of London, New York and Sydney based on month and also the average hours that these cities have sunny weather during a year. Overall, while the New York and London have similar pattern of temperatures during the year, the pattern of Sydney is totally different with that of New York and London. Besides, New York is responsible for the sunniest hours in a year in comparison to London and Sydney.
The New York experienced an upward trend in first seven months of the year as it reached from about 5 in Jan to about 30 in July, following that the figure dropped steadily in Aug and returned to its original level at the end of the year. There was an insignificant difference between the average temperatures in the first month of the year between New York and London by a margin of 4. During the first three months of the year the temperature of London rose inconsiderably, however it showed a steeper trend in next four months as it reached about 25 in the middle of july.it then fell gradually and hit the lowest point in December by about 10.
Sydney showed a reverse pattern as the average temperature was the highest point in Jan with nearly 25. It stayed almost unchanged from Jan to middle of March, after which it decreased and reached just over 15 in July. In the last six months of the year the temperature grew moderately and returned to about 25 as it was in Jan. furthermore, New York had the most sunshine as 2535 hours of year were sunny there and Sydney was the second sunniest city by a margin of 58 hours. The sunny hours of London was almost one second of that of New York and Sydney.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 303.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51155115512 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48940286883 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438943894389 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7153331419 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178214651243 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864167699799 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553943589326 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132083057399 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136966952255 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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