These days, a considerable proportion of people have a strong desire to work for themselves and they refuse to work as an employee for others. I believe it mainly happens due to possibilities that technology offers to us to make money and also many people think that establish your own business is more profitable in comparison with work for a company. However, being self-employed can have some drawbacks too such as increasing the level of responsibility and stress
Technologies such as computer and internet have opened a new door in front of people as they can establish many internet-based business and make money without being forced to work for other people. For example, people can sell their products easily or introduce their services by means of a website that people visit it through internet. Furthermore, in some cases having your own business might lead to have more financial freedom due to fact that you do not have to wait till end of the month to receive your salary. Finally there is a huge likelihood for those people working for themselves to be more successful and more productive as most people are more creative when they know that their creativity directly influences on how much money they earn.
However, self-employment can be disadvantageous for two main reasons. Firstly, when you are working for yourself you have to take heavy responsibilities that you might not take when you are a simple employee. For instance, an English teacher who is teaching English lessons through a website is in charge of doing all tasks and preparing teaching materials and he would be the primary responsible if something goes wrong. Secondly, managing and operating a business or job can be totally stressful when you work for yourself because many things can be out of control and these all can make people stressed.
In conclusion, I believe recently people have tendency to be self-employed due to huge benefits it offers although it could be extremely challenging to take all responsibilities and work for yourself.
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 61
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...nd of the month to receive your salary. Finally there is a huge likelihood for those pe...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y things can be out of control and these all can make people stressed. In conclu...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...hough it could be extremely challenging to take all responsibilities and work for yours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325443787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96377207118 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3426853017 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.636363636 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314806887291 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143087625816 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100778685812 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233944413838 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580462155346 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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