The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams illustrates the average the average temperatures of three different cities during a year and also the average hours which these cities have sunny weather in a year. Overall, the temperature pattern in London and New York are almost similar while Sydney showed a reverse pattern. Besides, while London had the least sunny hours, the New York was responsible for most significant sunny hours in a year.
In the first seven months of the year the temperature in New York and London has increased gradually as the New York temperature in the middle of July is in the highest point with around 30 and London temperature is just less than 25 during the July. However, the temperature in Sydney has fallen from about 25 in Jan to more than 15 in the Middle of July.
In the next five months of the year London and New York experienced a downward trend as the former reached 5 in last month of the year and the latter returned to its original temperature in December. In contrast, there is a steady growth for the figure of Sydney in the rest of the year as it reached its highest point at 25 in December. Furthermore, New York had the most sunshine as 2535 hours of year were sunny and Sydney was the second sunniest city by a margin of 58 hours. The sunny hours of London was almost one second of that of New York and Sydney.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The diagrams illustrates the average the average temperatures of...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the average'.
Suggestion: the average
The diagrams illustrates the average the average temperatures of three different cities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47950819672 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44656341309 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450819672131 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0764847108 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163158647827 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762122087982 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640832149974 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121417989696 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047133859026 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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