Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about how big a family should be. While nuclear families have their own benefits, I would argue that living in a multi-generation family bring more advantages.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people prefer to live with their spouse and children. Firstly, with the modern lifestyle, since people are busier than they used to be, they do not have enough time to care for many family members. For example, most young parents go to work in the day-time and want to have dinners at restaurants with their children instead of going home to cook for all family members. Secondly, because they need to face pressures at work, they need more time for being alone to have rest after work. If they live in an extended family, they are likely to share rooms with other members, which leads to lack of relaxing time.
On the other hand, I believe that a big family with more than two generations brings more conveniences for people to live in. First, because family is about helping each other to overcome difficulties in life, it is better to have more members in a family. For example, when young parents need to be away from home for a few days, grandparents can help them to take care of the children. Additionally, living with children and parents helps people strengthen their family bonds. For example, people from the three generations can prepare and have meals together, also they can go picnic at weekends.
In conclusion, while nuclear families bring some advantages, I support the opinion that it is better to live in big family units
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79562043796 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47109131569 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3715584135 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242542621623 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114785366403 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924407321896 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210648472634 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900864723385 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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