Some people prefer to shop for food in the supermarket. Other people do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this modern era, online shopping has become popular in terms of clothes, medicines, food products, and many more. While some people like to go supermarket physically to buy groceries, other people prefer to buy food online. This essay will discuss both views and why I think online shopping is superior, all the explanations described in the following paragraphs.
There are mainly two reasons for people like to purchase food by visiting markets. Firstly, they found the good quality of food by hand-picked and secondly, it gives them satisfaction by visiting a market. For instance, as per a result of research, over 65% of people found more satisfied when they brought fruits by themselves from shops and supermarkets in the USA. Overall, visiting a supermarket gives satisfaction to people, they become more aware of vitamins and minerals of food.
Online shopping plays a major role in humans in this high-tech era, which is easy to use and convenient to compare with shopping malls. Also, it is a time-saving method for humans. For instance, in 2020, there were over 70% of people in India selected to buy a food product from the online store because it saved their valuable time. Although online shopping for food does not give any satisfaction, it makes lives easy in this busiest era.
To conclude, all people have their reason when they go to buying food-related products, fruits, and vegetables. Going physically to a supermarket gives satisfaction, whereas online shopping saves valuable time for humans. In my words, despite having some disadvantages of online shopping, which will create good impacts on humans than a supermarket because it is convenient and time-saving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17454545455 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82024323434 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8839169558 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467463068187 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155244943706 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625832759529 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288736051956 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615899837624 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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