Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each. Which shopping experience do you prefer...
Individuals now have preferences regarding where to shop. While a proportion of them chose to buy from malls because of its convenience, others prefer the traditional market for its freshness of food products. This essay will discuss the merits associated with both views and reach a concluding stance
One major benefits of shopping in the Mall is that it is convenient for customers. Many people are engaged with white collar jobs and as such spend most of their time during the day working. They say that buying from the more is far more better than patronising located markets, because most shopping marts are open even into the dead of the night. As a result of this, they can easily branched the marts on their way home to pick up every thing they need. Mr Daniels, a banker, is a good example as he prefers buying all his goods from the shopping centres mostly after a busy day at work because of the ease at which he gets all the items on the shopping list. It is therefore more beneficial to people to shop easily from the marts.
On the other hand, local market equally has its own merits. Firstly, Customers have the opportunity to purchase fresh goods from the local stores as they are brought to the market immediately they are harvested. Another advantage of local stores is that customers have the liberty to bargain for the items before buying, this can not be said of shopping centres as the goods are well labelled according to prices on the rank, hence buyers are not afforded the opportunity to beat down the price.
Having had the privilege to shop in both markets, I enjoy purchasing all my goods from the traditional markets for the fact that its more cheaper as well as getting the products in their freshness.
To conclude, undoubtedly shopping either in the mall or local shops has its own positive side as discussed above, however, buying from the traditional shop without any doubt, will always be a priority to me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ey say that buying from the more is far more better than patronising located markets, becau...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'branch'
Suggestion: branch
...t. As a result of this, they can easily branched the marts on their way home to pick up ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use of the ease at which he gets all the items on the shopping list. It is theref...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ms on the shopping list. It is therefore more beneficial to people to shop easily...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Having had the privilege to shop in both markets, I enjoy purchasing all ...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...aditional markets for the fact that its more cheaper as well as getting the products in thei...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...kets for the fact that its more cheaper as well as getting the products in their f...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...kets for the fact that its more cheaper as well as getting the products in their freshness...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74269005848 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45027844069 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3366699526 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283268999685 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103771179035 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726507025936 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154902178471 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507722221465 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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