Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern society, some people are interested in working and performing similar things and dislike the modification in their lives. Yet, others hold the view that modification can be an opportunity to develop their current lives. While both views are reasonable, to some extent, I personally prefer the second viewpoint.
People who tend to enjoy their repetitive daily life and do what they actually do every day because they feel satisfied with their current lives. Also, they are not likely to change that lifestyle due to the fear of risk. In specific, some office staff may experience this repetitive lifestyle when almost all of them have a tendency to work in a company from the early morning until the late night and then go home. subsequently, the next working day is repeated. However, they may not be frustrated with this life cycle because almost all of the time is used for rendering their works and they do not have any time left to perceive their expectations in changing to the new lives. Furthermore, living and doing the same thing are supposed to be a hobby of introverted people as this personality renders them love to do the same businesses alone and their lives become quite simple without excessive of people connection. As a result, they may not have any reason to alter this simple life.
On the other hand, the others tend to be excited about experiencing an alteration frequently. In their perspectives, alterations can lead them to encounter a variety of opportunities both in terms of career and personal life. Perhaps the best example of this world be the travel-lovers who always desire to create new journeys in their lives by accessing numerous destinations both regionally and internationally. Also, they may face plenty of other people with different cultural backgrounds or experience in some other exotic lands which enable to render them realized that they may be appropriated with another type of occupation or living area. Therefore, this reason can support the view that modifications can always encounter people to a good chance if they tend to try without the fear of error.
In conclusion, there are some people who can be a type of hate-to-change person but love-to-change can be also the personality of the others who really inspire to achieve a more successful and better quality of life. Therefore, they are likely to consider alteration as their own daily happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01485148515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86494690912 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507425742574 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9222081453 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.176470588 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248772577351 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081969918267 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515124982344 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162818806405 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228404277589 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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