There are peoples in the contemporary society who thinks the opposite. There is an interesting debate about whether some people think that idinticial life is good for living or other people would rather live with swapping. In my opinion, every day should be different so that you don’t be boring in your life.
Looking more the closely the view which as a member of society, every people should change personal life. If people’s life style be various, their desire to live increase.
Firstly, if the person has differently activities on the agenda, their health and immunity will develop. For example, I am in favor of a variously transition each day. It may be in my activity, learning method and teaching strategy. My profession demand teaching in different ways, so that I try to educate studentswith variously mode. For this reason, a different approach to each area will have a positive impact not only our lives but also on our activities.
Secondly, most people have to relocate the furniture in their bedroom, hall and other room. I think the same room and appearance affects on a person’s mood. This has been proven psychologists.
Finally, when people try to escape from the same life, their pleasure and interest in every moment increases. The supporters of this view-point demonstrate some opinion advocate it. The first supportive point is that cause providing that many people during life make similar things. They will achieve each work is done on time. Usually such people who loves elderly homogeneity. They do eacg work with a plan.
Taking everything consideration, it is appealing discussion which striving for uniformity and avoiding the same things are essential. In my opinion, the same living gives people a boring life. So that you spend day and your life differently.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always good Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always good Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the closely the'. Did you mean 'closely the'?
Suggestion: closely the
...t be boring in your life. Looking more the closely the view which as a member of society, ever...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('variously') instead an adjective, or a noun ('transition') instead of another adjective.
... develop. For example, I am in favor of a variously transition each day. It may be in my activity, lea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08417508418 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71572982324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8614316446 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283321094131 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721451035348 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626152240205 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145654678617 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704329680356 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the closely the'. Did you mean 'closely the'?
Suggestion: closely the
...t be boring in your life. Looking more the closely the view which as a member of society, ever...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('variously') instead an adjective, or a noun ('transition') instead of another adjective.
... develop. For example, I am in favor of a variously transition each day. It may be in my activity, lea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08417508418 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71572982324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8614316446 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283321094131 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721451035348 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626152240205 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145654678617 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704329680356 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.