Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool, others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the backwards of video games outweigh the benefits?
Nowadays, video games are more popular than ever, day by day players of video games are increasing significantly from all ages and backgrounds. Although many people think that video games affect people badly, others, including myself, think that their advantages far outweigh their disadvantages.
To begin with, some people believe that there are many disadvantages to playing video games. Firstly, interest in video games from an early age might have a bad effect such as visual impairment which affects many teenagers including children from all over the world. Secondly, it is fact that video games are passion and desire. For example, a defeat in a game makes a person play again until it reaches the goal, but this way can lead to serious psychological upset and nervous explosions not only by adults but also from younger generation. However, i believe that these problems can be solved easily by making a well-structured time table that limits the daily exposure to video games.
Nevertheless, video games can have positive outcomes on the players in various areas of life. Start with passion that will bring to the professionalism of the player who will be famous in this area and become clack throughout the world. This glory will lead to many new acquaintances and there is no better feeling to know that people consider you as their idol in this sphere. Video games can be used to deliver various types of information and become a powerful tool in educating the youth and this is enjoyable way that can choose a future profession such as creating their own video game.
In conclusion, while playing video games can have some side effects, i surely think that they are easily solvable and that their positives outweigh the negatives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00343642612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63658772066 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8471936261 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399849985436 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160291212389 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808210807559 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254990008245 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432373111411 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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