An increasing in production of consumer goods results in damage of the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?
Nature is all around us. It is a blessing that given us by god. Natural environment provide us with many voluble things, but we do not value them by using wrongly with productions of consumer goods. I would like to discuss some major causes and solutions of this problem.
To begin with the causes, first of all, it is world population which is increasing day by day. And this is clearly increases the production of various goods such S foods, clothes and row materials. Undoubtedly, production of these materials necessary many largest factories which that cause damage through air pollution. Nowadays, the most used products are plastics and poly bags. They are literally everywhere in the world. And this is another problem, because if there are a lot of plastics, there will be more recycling which produces biodegradable gases to the air.
The solutions are not easy. However, there is a popular saying, " Nothing is impossible", thus, this problem also has possible solutions. Firstly, we should use the natural environment wisely. We should buy and use consuming production in a limit proportion. Secondly, government should reduce the production of plastic and come up with new ways so as not to harm to the nature. Finally, individuals should follow a more eco-friendly consumptions habits. In my opinion, by taking these statements, our living environment would become better.
In conclusion, overpopulation, air pollution and non-compliance with the rules of nature, we ourselves admit damaging the environment. However, we can protect it if we follow solutions mentioned above.
- Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool, others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the backwards of video games outweigh the benefit 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26953125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04809420719 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9472934472 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223061439815 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598165668725 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467406734064 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119445726416 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259463676383 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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