Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational
tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the
people who play them.
In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
It is certainly true that video games have been gaining popularity since the late 1990s. some people consider the computer game is fruitful for learning has reasonable entertainment, the remaining group of thinkers believes it has an injurious effect on the public, in my opinion, disadvantages certainly surpass benefits.
To commence, for a number of reasons video games are entertaining and educative. firstly, video games could help people in releasing their stress. the individual feels excitement while playing solo games such as shooting and survival games while playing games person forget all problems of their life and deeply connected with game for some hours. Moreover, having addicted to games can be helpful for people in some way to learn, for instance, they can even polish their calculating skills by playing sudoku games also they can broaden the horizon of their vocabulary knowledge in order to play vocabulary solving games.
However, being connected with video games can be deleterious in some ways.there are offensive online games that would be expensive for their budget such as poker or adult games, before joining these games someone needs to pay a high amount of money even though it would not be refunded. It can not be neglected these days these games have been a primary attraction in young juveniles henceforth, mankind turned into for doing antisocial activities such as robbery or murder
.
In conclusion, I recapitulate that although playing games would be beneficial for improving physical health, it would be dangerous in order to constantly addicted to offensive games and spending loads of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31923076923 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70185855206 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7894521987 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334511633397 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168942749 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483196569291 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209675857302 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785760524785 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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