Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
In the light of technology proliferation, advertising has been becoming the most straight-forward method to market products. Many supporters think that with the appearance of advertisement our life absolutely will be much more advanced ; however, other stances suppose that due to ads, people tend to buy more unnecessary items . From my personal perspective , advertising virtually balance well between benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand , commercial may create numerous advantageous contribution to the prosperity of companies as well as giving opportunity to workforce. First of all, ads is undoubtedly considered as one of the most effective tools which informs us a variety of products in every distinct field. Owing to widely propaganda , products’ brand will itself gain more popularity which absolutely promotes the profit and total revenue of conglomerates. Additionally, together with the help of mass media, it enable buyers to give more clear-sighted comparisons in terms of price and product quality. The mushrooming of advertisement agencies , moreover, decidedly gives chance to employers as well as job seekers. Therefore, it might release pressure on job market and government authority.
On the other hand, advertising abuse could result in many detrimental consequences on spenders.Initially, a mass of enterprises make use of ads to exaggerate brand image rather than focusing on enhancing product quality. For example , many technology companies show adverts that their new phones have been upgraded with optimal processors comparing to the obsolete predecessor. Sometimes, it may be a trap to appeal customers purchasing their merchandise. Besides , with some celebrity endorsements to new products, it may seem to be more convincing for their fans to squander more money on these stuffs . That buying unnecessarily is obvious affect negatively to the excessively –shopping habits of young generation. Gradually, advertising will be able to manipulate human livers especially children – who are easily targeted by stores.
In conclusion, advertising has been using as a tool for conglomerates making their profit instead of concentrating on people needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75308641975 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41584694515 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651234567901 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8646850641 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176566311333 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496433462976 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289630757865 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103319461081 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247848922078 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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