Some people say that advertising is extremely useful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that adverting is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Advertisements appear on everywhere in our daily life in today’s times. Some people claim that advertising is the best way to stimulate people buy the products. Some people argue that it doesn’t attract our attentions anymore because it’s too ubiquitous. If asked my mind in this discussion, I would say I do agree the former idea, and I believe it has several marketing strategies.
To begin with, commercial messages display in a variety of methods and appeal different fields of consumers. By investing on the internet, TV programs, and newspapers, the functions of the products influence people decisions unconsciously because the informations appear frequently. Moreover, the companies would investigate the marketing status first and analyse the target audiences. Take a relevant case as an example, the commercial messages of protein powder and relative fitness equipments usually show up around the gyms; therefore, the memberships of the fitness will be affected by these marketing strategies.
Furthermore, the advertisements still play a vital role in sales programs. Although some advertisements are so common that ignore it , we often remind the specific products when the relative incidents happened on us. For instance, three umbrella, one of the most well known medicines in Taiwan, often shows up on the TV and radio, but when we occasionally get a fever or flu, it will be the first medical option rather than other brands which rarely appear on media.
To sum up, according to the above statements, if the companies use the marketing strategies well and spread the contents repeatedly, it’s still one of the most effective methods to persuade people’s decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39097744361 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04808633119 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.849579967 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181550969294 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644063577755 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695043151825 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102403624606 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059295775742 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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