Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientist. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include relevant example of your own experience.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that should artists like painters, writers as well as musicians have great impact on human life as compare to scientist or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that great personalities such as painters, writers and musicians changes our life in an optimistic approach. They strengthen their view point by claiming that individuals belong to such profession plays a significant role to relax our mind. Because, in present scenerio, everyone follow hectic time schedule. Therefore, by utilizing relaxation techniques for example, listening music and reading some inspirational books which were written by writers during leisure time is highly effective way to mend the serious illness 'hypertension.' Furthermore, there are plethora of writers from India for instance, Amrita pritam, Bhagat pooran singh who wrote voluminous inspirational books which encourage us to do our task with honestly to achieve success in each sector of our life.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that scientist plays an important role in human life. They claim that voluminous inventions related to space completely changes our life. Mission of mars organized by famous scientist named A.P.J Abdul kalam would be the perfect epitome. Moreover, massive number of satellites were launched by various scientist like Arya bhatta to weather forecasting. As a result, farmers especially, able to grow crops accordingly.
To crown it all, I pen down by saying that nevertheless, there is no single conclusion. Still, I take this ground that nodoubt, artists changes our life in an optimistic way but, scientist too provide great assistance to develop scientific attitude among the individuals which Changes our life effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, honestly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36443148688 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91426506455 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8216990353 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204056158746 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550785968557 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507678316718 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116813758891 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028650505826 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.