Some people say that the best way to improve public health by increasing the number of sports facilities others never say that this would have little effects on public health and that other measures are required?
We all know that health is wealth but due to business and to earn more and more money people are going to neglect it. In the current time
of technological advancement one of the most pressing concerns regarding to given topic is that which is best to improve public health :sports facilities or other measures? I shell explore the same from various Aspects in the following paragraphs.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that the best way to improve public health by increasing number of sports facilities. They strengthen their viewpoint by claiming that by opening big grounds and parks it will be improved. The will be use these parks for walking and small exercises. Secondly, by opening gyms and exercise centres, by hiring good trainers in the centres is also helpful to improve the public health. For instance, by giving good advice about healthy diet by sports clubs is also beneficial for peoples.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that this would have a little effects on public health. The gyms and health clubs broken the people from their environment. Secondly, gyms and other sports facilities distract the youth from there studies. Thirdly, they think that joining of gyms is totaly wastage of money. They recommend that people have to change their lifestyle and have to eat accordingly to their blood group. They have to spend their time in fresh air and keep contact with nature. The best epitone is that most of the doctors recommended to eat healthy food and stay healthy.
Nevertheless, weighing both options, I believe that there is no single conclusion. Still, I take this ground that a effective clap require both use of hands. It depends upon the individuals and their economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: SHELL_WE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'shall'?
Suggestion: shall
...:sports facilities or other measures? I shell explore the same from various Aspects i...
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Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
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Line 4, column 569, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended eating'.
Suggestion: recommended eating
...est epitone is that most of the doctors recommended to eat healthy food and stay healthy. Nevert...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...clusion. Still, I take this ground that a effective clap require both use of hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88294314381 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49468736757 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0704154638 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345102411259 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901390404621 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109800219859 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157206574533 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810266371878 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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