Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is often said that establishing the equipment of sports may improve the poor health of livers. While the importance of sport training is undeniable, I believe that there are several pieces of factor may also influence our health.
Although it is no doubt that the sport development can strengthen our body as well as prevent the invoking of bacteria effectively, the significance of regular diet should not be overlooked. The best example of this statement would be a strongly evidence that the existing diet of hong kong workers. Because of the time management is critical as long as their lunch or dinner time is limited, hence, they would prefer to eat in the fast food shop like cafe de coral. Since the dishes at these fast food shop is certainly unhealthy, a fat body from hong kong employees is not rare to observe after a long period of work. Thus, the regular diet is crucial as soon as we are improving our health.
On the other hand, the living habits should not be ignored also. it is always seen that lung cancer is occurred on the older smokers, which proves that our health would be damaged by some poor habits, such as smoking, over contacting with alcohol or the unbalanced sleeping routine. The above examples could lead to a serious disease. Therefore, controlling the living habits is a critical measurement to strengthen our body healthier.
In conclusion, the better methods should be controlling the living habits and also keeping a regular eating diet instead of building the sport equipment, as far as reinforce our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85338345865 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63200050329 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8530910897 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124459871416 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489445326922 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369604967797 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802878884518 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245536634016 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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