Some people say that children no longer need to develop handwriting skills, others believe that handwriting is still important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our modern world, in all walks of life, people are judged by their handwriting writing a letter, completing a form at the bank, filling out immigration forms, Jotting down a shopping list….handwriting is part of our daily lives. some may say that there is no need to having a good skills of handwriting; however, others, included myself agree that having good skills of handwriting and developing it is necessary in our life.
Now the question is: is it really important to leran and develop handwriting skills for children?
On the one hand, those who believe that expanding skills of handwriting specially for children is not essential they have their own reasons. they say that nowadays our life is surrounded by technology and in some fields like handwriting, we don’t need the old methods instead we should learn and develop new methods like typing with computers keyboards. they say for example, today most of peoples use e-mails and social media instead of old methods of paper based mails.
On the other had, I personally believe that having a good hadwriting as important as other skills. In the following I try to point out some significent virtues of handwriting. first of all,handwriting activates the brain more than keyboarding because it involves more complex motor and cognitive skills. Scondly, children who experience difficulty mastering handwriting may avoid writing and produce poor written work. children with poor handwriting will find it hard to proof read their own work. they will then fail to spot their mistakes and their confidence may dip even lower. And finally, when we reach adulthood, it feels more, having a good handwriting. If we’re trying to get a job, good writing skills make us more desirable to the employer. one of the first things an employer looks at is; how is the cover letter or resume.
in conclusion, i personally believe that, despite new technologies in many fields, still having good hand writing plays an important role in our daily life and children, students, teachers, lecturers, parents feel happy, confident and inspired by good handwriting skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1757925072 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87243420405 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579250720461 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7062278004 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242014853937 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782648042831 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554616792527 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14109307876 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171933404066 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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