Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have negative effect on young people’s writing and reading skills.Do you agree or disagree?
Many educators have shown their concern that young people may limit their ability to writing and reading if they spend a lot of chatting on the PC or cellphones.In my opinion, I agree with the idea that communicating by PC and phones will have bad effects on young learner.
Firstly, the majority of the time young people spend on the PC and phones are chatting to someone or commenting on other’s twitters. That means their messages or statements are short in length with not much logical thinking or quick-responded, which do little help organizing a professional essay or a valuable article.What’s more grammar mistakes and Internet languages are often seen in the texts from the internet, which won’t be acceptable when conducting an formal writing task.These habits of using that languages will influence their performance of their wiring work.
Secondly, reading ability of the young will be influenced as well if they exposed themself a lot to the internet context.Floods of information may attract one’s attention when comprehending an material on the screen and that leads to deep reading.
In conclusion, although the electronic products let people engage in connecting with others more conveniently, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance.
In conclusion, although the electronic products let people engage in connecting with others more conveniently, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45957446809 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27218824868 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.167221296 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.833333333 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286490048598 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150310745885 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632729921588 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160603206258 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612497067249 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.