Students in our school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources(eg internet or TV),do you agree or disagree？
Rapid development of technology enables students to have various access to knowledge，for example Internet courses , TV series , documentaries and so on. Although these resources are very welcomed by students, I am still in the camp that students learn more from classes of teachers than other recourse.
Firstly, systematically organized knowledge are easier accepted by students than those are in fragments. The information presented on the internet or TV comes in usually in a piece of comment or a brief introduction with not much deep academic value. While the way teachers and professors teach is a step-by-step progress that adapts with cognitive process.
Secondly, the interaction with teachers at classroom is an irreplaceable process in enhancing what they really get in mind. Questions are raised promtly by students and then teachers could solve their problems in time and that is what students cannot do in front of a TV set. Also， group study in the classroom boosts cooperation among students and therefore encourage them to learn with each other more . That’s typically true when students are assigned with a specific project which requires determined contribution to solve an actual problem with team workers from different backgrounds.
Although TV and the internet offer plenty of chances to broaden students horizon and discover their interest in a certain area, classroom learning is irreplaceable in the process of forming students structured knowledge and team working.
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| 2018-11-21 | Willow Wang | 60 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5367965368 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04414221279 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4010695034 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286041442065 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107949621154 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824506358684 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171452114224 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748787092718 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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