Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means;others believe that these games are contributing to children’ development.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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...technology. Computer is not exceptional.Presently,some masses reckon that computer games ...
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... games are harmful for offspring's.On contrary,others believe that video game...
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... the overall development of adolescents.Here,I would like to account for both sides ...
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...ative aspects of playing computer games.First and foremost,in this contemporary world...
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...laying computer games.First and foremost,in this contemporary world,computer games ...
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... and foremost,in this contemporary world,computer games may adversely effects on health o...
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...adversely effects on health of children.For example,nowadays,infants spend prolonge...
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...ffects on health of children.For example,nowadays,infants spend prolonged hours in front ...
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...end prolonged hours in front of computer,laptop and mobile phones and further it,leads ...
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...,laptop and mobile phones and further it,leads to sedentary lifestyle. As a result,the...
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...eads to sedentary lifestyle. As a result,the children become victim of health hazard...
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...im of health hazards such as week optics,headache, migraine,respiratory illness and many ...
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...s such as week optics,headache, migraine,respiratory illness and many more. Consequently,com...
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...tory illness and many more. Consequently,computer games are bad for juveniles. There a...
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...positive aspects of playing video games.To commence with,computer games are lucrat...
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... of playing video games.To commence with,computer games are lucrative for infants to broa...
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...or infants to broaden knowledge horizon.To examplify,in video games pupils have to...
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...o broaden knowledge horizon.To examplify,in video games pupils have to explore enor...
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...es of games in order to win. As a result,the children tend to develop high level thi...
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...t makes them more skillful and creative.Furthermore, a child becomes good decision maker un...
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...r under the influence of strategy games.In this way,computer games contribute rema...
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... influence of strategy games.In this way,computer games contribute remarkably in the deve...
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...markably in the development of children.Consequently,computer games are lucrative for infant...
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...the development of children.Consequently,computer games are lucrative for infants. In ...
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...e lucrative for infants. In my notion,both aspects have their own significance.Und...
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...oth aspects have their own significance.Undeniably,computer games has several drawbacks.Ho...
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...s have their own significance.Undeniably,computer games has several drawbacks.However,com...
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...ly,computer games has several drawbacks.However,computer games are lucrative for the be...
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...uter games has several drawbacks.However,computer games are lucrative for the betterment ...
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...ucrative for the betterment of children.Therefore, the children should be played these ga...
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...omenon can be curbed. To recapitulate,games become indispensable part of every indi...
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... indispensable part of every individual.Undeniably,computer games has several disadvantage...
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...able part of every individual.Undeniably,computer games has several disadvantages.However...
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...omputer games has several disadvantages.However,it is beneficial for the development of...
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... games has several disadvantages.However,it is beneficial for the development of ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.60465116279 5.12529762239 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.19243300344 2.80592935109 185% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.126738719 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.333333333 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346722357854 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15244120658 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908495388233 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201000797308 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583822537961 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.59 12.4159519038 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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