Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subject in elementary school such as reading, writing and math how far do you agree or disagree?
Submitted by Patel Romaa on Tue, 01/26/2021 - 04:43
Almost the people think that computer skills should be developed for the graded school in including primary subjects such as reading, writing, and mathematics. in my opinion, I agree with this statement because of the best age to learning for the improving your skills.
First of all, the computer skills developed for the garden school(perticular sixth to eight standards)and also there are improving subjects such as reading, writing, and maths as per my opinion, owing to improve the skill ability and brainstorm and easy to work understood the feature and ideas and it is also used full the morden technology easy to communicate easily to reading and writing for the help the academic purpose. for example, computer skills added to other subjects because it is helpful for academic purposes such as online classes, online form, research, power presentation, online exam as well as computer skill also useful for making PowerPoint, excellent word, table and also making the result.
In addition, computer skills should be added to the main subject not only the use for the academic purpose but also helped in the feature life for the regarding business and it is also helpful the morden technology such as call center and also computer classes, typewriting, moreover the perticular job description for instance nowadays all the people used computer because it is necessary to need own self. and especially the computer uses the making resume sending an email, furthermore attending the conference, seminars easy to communicate and it is helpful the business marketing.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I agree with the statement the computer skills should be added to the primary subject in elementary school due to the use the two main purpose firstly on the academic side and secondly for the better future job and business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24834437086 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79681502725 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490066225166 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.063970959 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.428571429 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255023512297 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133356587393 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806943221437 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153768072507 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878032126219 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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