Some people say that drug companies have a responsibility to spend money on researching medicines that will help people in poorer countries. Others say the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are contrasting opinions about whether drug companies should prioritize researching medicines to assist people in impoverished countries or focus solely on profit. In my opinion, although earning money is the fundamental objective of every drug company, we should not overlook the main purpose of establishing a pharmaceutical company, which is to aid people, especially patients in poor areas.
On the one hand, some people believe that drug companies should mainly generate money for these reasons. First, when a company specializing in drug research earns sufficient financial resources, it can fund its upcoming projects, such as developing vaccines for emerging contagious diseases. For instance, Pfizer was able to finance its Covid-19 vaccine experiments and trials to help worldwide citizens, which a small company cannot afford to do. Moreover, a profitable drug company has more opportunities to export its medicine to the world and it brings transportation taxes to the country’s economy. Therefore, some people might support the idea of drug companies’ responsibility to focus on profit.
On the other hand, I believe that drug companies shoulder the responsibility of researching medicines to aid people, especially in poorer countries as they are created to save lives rather than making money. Drug companies should spend money on creating medicines affordable to poor patients to save more lives. The reason is that drug companies exist primarily to better healthcare for all individuals, thus they need to invest on creating effective medicines approachable to many people, especially in poor countries where medical infrastructure remains insufficient. Furthermore, funding drug research represents an essential obligation embedded in every drug company's mission - ensuring their existence in the pharmaceutical industry through the distribution of medicine aiming at improving people's health.
In conclusion, opinions regarding drug companies’ primary responsibility vary among people. However, I believe that drug companies fulfil their purpose to help people’s health by inventing and distributing reasonably priced, effective medication sinstead of utilizing drugs for money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.925 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17873657656 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1968797547 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.846153846 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412077740176 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173847303854 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778404926421 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266950393765 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522504854571 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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