Some people say that drug companies have a responsibility to spend money on researching medicines that will help people in poorer countries. Others say the main responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are contrasting opinions about whether drug companies should be responsible for researching medicines to help people in impoverished countries or earning solely for profit. In my opinion, although earning money is the fundamental aim of every drug company to survive in the industry, we should not forget the main purpose of establishing a pharmaceutical company, which is to help people, especially patients in poor areas.
On the one hand, some people believe that drug companies should mainly focus on making money for these reasons. First, when a company specializing in drug research earns a lot of money, it can fund its upcoming projects, such as creating new types of vaccines to cure emerging contagious diseases. For instance, Pfizer was able to fund their Covid-19 vaccine experiments and trials to help worldwide citizens as a big drug company in the industry, which is what a small company cannot afford to do. Moreover, a profitable drug company has more opportunities to export and distribute its medicine to the world and it brings transportation taxes to the country’s economy. Therefore, some people might support the idea of drug companies’ responsibility to earn money solely.
On the other hand, I believe that drug companies are accountable for researching medicines to help people, especially in poorer countries as they are established to support individuals’ lives not just make money. Drug companies should spend money efficiently on creating a new medicine that is affordable to poor patients to save more lives. The reason is that drug companies are invented to better and provide healthcare to every person, thus they need to spend money on creating effective and affordable medicines that can approach many people, especially in poor countries where medical infrastructure is still obsolete. Furthermore, funding drug research is a crucial responsibility that every drug company carries instead of making money because medicines are mainly created for humans and by distributing medicines to improve people’s health can a drug company exist in the drug industry.
In conclusion, the opinion of drug companies’ main responsibility is still a matter of debate for many people. However, I believe that drug companies are responsible for helping people with their health and perform their purpose by inventing reasonably priced, effective medicines instead of utilizing drugs to earn money.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is still obsolete. Furthermore, funding drug research is a crucial responsibilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4327176781 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03966257944 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493403693931 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1179172691 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.384615385 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456623328824 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214608185107 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824575977617 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327011997643 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569768430186 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is still obsolete. Furthermore, funding drug research is a crucial responsibilit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4327176781 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03966257944 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493403693931 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1179172691 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.384615385 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456623328824 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214608185107 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824575977617 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327011997643 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569768430186 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.