Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, technology has become the part and parcel of our life. By emerging this, some individuals think that traditional newspapers and magazines will be replaced by E-books and modern technology. To some extent it is true, but I do believe that paper books cannot be replaced by online sources.
To commence with, getting knowledge on Internet has become a trend because of its convenience. At moment, information can be accessed by citizens and they can come across through all happenings, which are going on in the world. For instance, kindle and Daily News apps are available on the Internet in which citizens can search for the latest news and books, and they may enhance their knowledge. So, they do not need to carry books and newspapers in their bags in the presence of technological gadgets. Moreover, all types of knowledge are available on the Internet and people can access information related to different fields like economy and politics. Hence, they may enhance their cognition in different areas.
However, reading long hours of paper books can be more helpful than online sources, because reading on screen may affect the eyesight of a person. For instance, if a person reads offline content, he may develop better reading skills without any health issues like poor eyesight. In addition to it, there are so many remote areas in the world where accessing the internet is not possible; as a result, paper books and newspapers are the only sources of information.
To conclude, despite all benefits of technological sources of knowledge, I believe, they cannot replace traditional newspapers and books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14716981132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72670168893 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1120871764 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198407161319 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078328593456 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101490424879 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150071924234 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126770712606 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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