Some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
In modern scenario, spending time with e-books and modern machines has become matter of concerning. Some people assert that in future, e-books and modern technology will be more important as compared to traditional newspapers and magazines. I partially disagree with this viewpoint and same will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there can be manifold factors which show that how e-books and modern technology will be more convenient for individuals. The primary fact is that electronic sources like computers and mobile phones provide many good features to read anything in human lives. As through these, they are able to brows information about what people want read: books, newspaper and magazines at anytime and anywhere. Owing to this, having used modern technology individuals can save their time as well as money. For example, majority of people who want read any newspaper and book, in this case, they do not need to buy paper made books and newspapers because of availability searching features through internet. Thus, the way of individuals in reading has changed totally because of modern technology.
On the other hand, there can be distinct reasons which demonstrate that why some people have much interest to read newspapers and magazines, which are made of paper. The key cause is that all people are not well educated like old citizens in order to operate the modern technology. As they always prefer to read newspapers and books rather than e-books. Due to this, they do not feel only comfortable to read anything but also avoid some health issues such as vision of eye and so on. For instance, the trend of reading traditional newspapers and magazines is maintained by elder citizens and reading lovers. Hence, it will be impossible that e-books will replace the traditional newspapers and books.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly, some features are being provided people by the modern technology. But traditional newspapers and magazines will remain due to some reasons which i have discussed in the body paragraph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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...overs. Hence, it will be impossible that e-books will replace the traditional new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23262839879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73846697226 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8211718901 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360278322391 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122598491179 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771318673735 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245098558493 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241088672643 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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