Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people suppose that the development of the economy can solely end starvation and poverty-stricken condition. While others argue that this growth should be stopped because it is annihilating our environment. I was convinced with the first idea as economic progress is vital.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that the rise of the economy has resulted in many environmental issues. One of them is the significant increase of emissions fumes in our daily lives which may destruct the ozone layers and cause ocean acidification. Consequently, the ecological diversity will be messed up. Furthermore, the garbage of many industrial areas is directly released into the living habitat of animals which may ends up in the mass extinction of thousands of species. For instance, the biological groups of species living near the world largest coral reef are in danger due to water pollution.
On the one hand, many countries nowadays are processing economical development as their first priority to endure starvation. In fact, this growth pulls off the raising of a variety of successful private entrepreneurs and industry which are governments’ main tax contributors. Therefore, the countries’ budgets are always in stable condition - an important factor in ending hunger and poverty. Last but not least, economic growth opens a plethora of job opportunities for homeless and poor people. Consequently, not only the unemployment and poverty-stricken rate will fall tremendously but also release the burden of financial support for those classes.
In conclusion, I agree that the development of economy can totally solve the hunger and poverty condition. However, it is unfit to suggest stopping all economical activities due to the environmental consequences caused by this procedure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... many countries nowadays are processing economical development as their first priority to ...
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Line 10, column 153, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...er, it is unfit to suggest stopping all economical activities due to the environmental con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52898550725 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25129488469 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2409582447 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198540736844 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603695280503 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551100058466 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129058599196 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855036461553 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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