Some people say that every human being can create cot, others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although, it is believed by some that every single person can have capability to produce art, others are of the opinion that only those people create art who have inmate ability. This essay will analyse whether everyone can create art or not, but I stand with the latter view as their innate ability help them to create art.
On the one hand, those who suggest that each and every individua is capable to create because every body can learn art due to the augmenting modern technology as all the people have the some skill set at the begining period. Anothere point they put forward is that if they have interent in learning art then they can pursue art by hardwork as well as they learn through schools or online websites in which all the detail are available. Similarly, dedication play a vital role to become the best artist.
On the other hand, there are two paramount reason why some people opine that only those people are able to make art who have inborn ability. Firstly, creating art or creativity is a natural talent from their ancestors who were good at art. In other words, people are curious to learn about their family history. Secondly, genetics and surroundings play a significant role in in establishing art. To illustrate, most of the popular artist are from the families that have the artistic background such as Pablo Picaso.
In my opinion, even though some people reckon that every individuals are able to learn and create are but I surmise that only those people have ability to create art who has innate ability owing to it is natural talent from their forefathers and people are agog to learn about their family background.
In recapitulation , despite people varying in their opinion, I deem that only people who born with the ability are talented in creating art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79421221865 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36686728252 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508038585209 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2557308587 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387056025751 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1569803604 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118672961523 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27259277585 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914983300093 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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