Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative What is your opinion

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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion

competition is common between students ,rivals at work or studies,and also between business personalties but the soul idea is whether the competition is healthy or bad competition because if there is healthy competition not need to worry but if it’s a rivalry grudge it will lead to any extent , so some people tell that children should start to be coperative opinion based on both will be discussed.

To begin with, competition is nothing but an nostalagic comparision between two persons whom themselves consider as worthy opponent, this kind of comparision may be usual between children who student by vying with other students to prove their caliber ,moreover the contention is quite good until it transforms into grudge ,if grudge arises between children at younger age or pursuing anything towards their opponent for their victory ,this ability need to be contemplated otherwise the children with is trait will do the same In future to drool others who they oppose and bring them down ,whereas this should be prevented from children and need to teach them what is a healthy competition.

Partially we need to agree to the terms of people who request that students need to be teached how to work with others in a collaboration and to learn how to merge with their fellowmates inorder to progress in their life, so functioning in group of two or more might teach children the definition of team work and coordination, apparently upcoming generation will start to compile with others inspite of their variation of kind and aspect, this will lead to success in work whatever done in groups or by team.

Finally ,to commence with the point illustrated its safe and healthy to operate in groups and gain profit over any circumstances in joint manner.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Competition
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...ivalry grudge it will lead to any extent , so some people tell that children shoul...
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...ion based on both will be discussed. To begin with, competition is nothing bu...
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... begin with, competition is nothing but an nostalagic comparision between two pers...
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...hers who they oppose and bring them down ,whereas this should be prevented from ch...
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... them what is a healthy competition. Partially we need to agree to the terms ...
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...ne in groups or by team. Finally ,to commence with the point illustrated i...
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... with the point illustrated its safe and healthy to operate in groups and gain ...
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...strated its safe and healthy to operate in groups and gain profit over any circ...
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...e and healthy to operate in groups and gain profit over any circumstances in jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05119453925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.749974232 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.17514496 49.4020404114 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.0 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.25 20.7667163134 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201952140671 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114257309888 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856206174357 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114257309888 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856206174357 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.0 13.0946893788 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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