some people say that government should not put more money on building theater and stadium. they should spend more money to put more money for medical care and education. which extent do u agree or disagree.
this is irrefutable that entertainment and health centers are very prominent for every nation.some people believe that government should allocate more money to build entertainment centers such as theaters and stadiums however some people believe that higher authority should should allocate more money for the betterment of education and medical facilities.In my opinion government should pay more money for education and medical but also give sufficient fund to entertainment sector.
First and foremost, there are a obvious number of merits about putting more money for education and medical center. But the most apparent would be that, allocating more money for medical will further assist to escalate the productivity of person. This is undoubtedly positive for simple reason that, if government spends more money to provide good medical facilities to folks, by doing this government can help to surge up the proportion of healthy people and if the person is healthy, he would work more effectively and work productivity would automatically climbed up . At the same time, everyone knows education is a backbone of every nation and plays more crucial key factor for the advancement of nation. If more fund will be allocated to education, government can be able to fight with inner devils of society like poverty and unemployment. So, I think its fair to say higher authority should impose more money for health and education sector.
On the flip side, art and entertainment is basic need of every person to keep them self fit and relax. There are few aspects about putting more money to develop entertainment infrastructure. First of all, theaters and stadium are essential for person.
These things assist the person to reduce the stress level of mind and moreover, people spend quality time in recreational center with there nears and dears. The second clear benefit could be that, recreational centers help to increase the GDP of any nation. One survey was conducted by oxford university's student , 30% of money comes from entertainment sector. So without any doubt, government should give sufficient fund to entertainment sector.
TO sum up, I pen down saying that both sectors have their own benefits for society and government respectively. So i believe, government should pay equal attention towards both sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31707317073 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8510589755 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.034518136 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.625 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441550770765 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136910173149 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112836363679 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229758935254 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14038326754 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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