some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and internet. discuss both view and discuss your opinion.
Traveling abroad has become a frequent subject of debate, some people believe that, it is compulsory to have at least one foreign trip to know more and more about another country however other folks believe , it is not important because everything is on internet and TV. I will discuss both statement and in last i give my opinion.
first and foremost, there are a number of obvious merits about foreign trip but the most apparent would be that, people would get a chance to know moral and ethical values of another country. This is undoubtedly positive for the simple reason that, by visiting abroad people can enhance their knowledge about particular place and also get opportunity to learn new language and culture about country . At the same time the another advantage would be that , people get chance to explore whole world by foreign trips and it may help to relax their mind and reduce the stress level as well. One survey was conducted by oxford student , 80% people find peace by traveling abroad. So, it is fair to say traveling abroad is good for people but not necessary.
On the flip side, there are couple of short comings about traveling abroad. the most impractical characteristic would be that, it is total waste of money and time. This is a clear limitation because due to advancement, people can see each and every aspect of foreign country on TV and internet. people should use that money on some important factors rather than wasting it on traveling and moreover time is money , people should impose their time to do some exercise, in order to stay fit and healthy.
To sum up, I pen down saying that, there are some negative and positive aspects of traveling abroad. In my view point, it should not compulsory for everyone but if people get chance and his budget allow him/her to go for foreign trip, people must go and explore the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, at least, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75384615385 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39483872636 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2033566562 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321867711271 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118451943316 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053714596995 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198959895385 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415127258407 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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