Nowadays, there is a trend that the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather those positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do u agree?
These days, a significant proportion of news, which are published by media or channel news, covers negative events rather than successful achievement. It is thought by some that it has disastrous consequences on people and society. I agree with this idea that negative news usually has increasingly powerful impacts including antisocial behaviors and depression feeling, but sometimes they have improvements.
On the one hand, covering press with detrimental contains has several benefits. In other words, the most significant advantage of publishing this information is improving the level of public awareness, also, people could take preventative measures to combat these problems. As a result, when the information about climate changes and their serious consequences would be online, everyone could attempt to solve these individual, by consider some simple steps, such as reducing the usage of non-biodegradable plastic and paper or using public transportations instead of private cars. For example, according to latest sales figure, buying the plastic goods are down by 2% in significant proportion of nations after a large number of programs made and publicized by their governments about plastic pollution and its consequences.
On the other hand, in my opinion, harmful news is made broadcast by mass media has adversely effects on people's mental and physical health. This means, with the surge of technology, social networking site, and 24-hour news cycle, exposure to negative events and feelings of hopelessness has rapidly increased, and it could lead person to struggle with mental disorders such as chronic stress, which upsets the body's hormone balance, and imposes threats on immune system. Another major concern is that, since population frequently bombarded with terrible news by TV channels, the crime activities have risen sharply. For instance, the recent studies conducted by United Nation's disaster-monitoring system revealed that 50% of adults who spend approximately 4 hours per day to watch news suffer from long-term emotional issues.
In conclusion, while the unpleasant news has some merits for both community and persons, I believe that the inevitable result of this outweigh the advantages.
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- some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport. others think that money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environment conservation. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 606, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...of private cars. For example, according to latest sales figure, buying the plastic goods ...
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Line 4, column 713, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...significant proportion of nations after a large number of programs made and publicized by their g...
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Line 4, column 827, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plastic pollution and its consequences. On the other hand, in my opinion, harmfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60540540541 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03115548583 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5342644268 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.266666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103065952942 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350225174381 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369530579357 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527900979472 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203792194621 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.