Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History

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...ence and technology are more significant . history tells about our ancients peopl...
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...e more significant . history tells about our ancients people howsoever science en...
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... howsoever science enhance our knowledge . In my opinion, it is important to lear...
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..., it is important to learn both subjects . The main purpose of this essay is to d...
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...s the subject who keep us connected with cultures . In addition, it allow us to ...
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...ness or moral comprehension of the world . For example, Vietnamese students are ta...
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... example, Vietnamese students are taught about the historical highlights in Vietn...
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... highlights in Vietnam like war and many ancient people who sacrificed their life...
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...ancient people who sacrificed their life because of peace and independence of the...
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...country .Moreover, awareness will spread in the humans with the help of this subj...
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...the humans with the help of this subject . Secondly,according to few civilians;...
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...to few civilians; science and technology have indispensible part in scholar life...
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...ter in schools. In contemporary era, the technology gives the young generation ma...
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...rs and recruited by multiple companies. In conclusion both history and science s...
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...n both history and science subjects have their own importance in schools. while h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34033613445 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94393432152 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63025210084 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6231935618 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365706446776 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120734158311 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834329066509 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208094939619 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10806901059 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.